Feedback: Sensations Montagne

I am looking for feedback. I hand drew this on an iPad and I am not convinced, do you any suggestions?

I have a number of more graphical designs but wondered if the hand-drawn approach will help make them stand out in the industry a bit.

It is a walking and cycling guiding company in the alps. Their current logo is here to understand the brief: https://www.sensationsmontagne.com/