Beauty-coworking website's redesign

I was recently given the fun task of redesigning the home screen of the beauty-coworking Kirel website's landing page!

My goal was to keep the existing concept while making it easier to use and giving the site a more modern look.

The home screen of the site before the redesign is shown below for your reference.

My first task was to spruce up the site's navigation, making it easier for users to find their way around. I also moved the company logo and address to more visible spots for users.

Next, I updated the photography to a higher quality and removed any extra visual elements.

And than, I refined the text, ensuring alignment, establishing a clear hierarchy, and grouping it by meaning.

Tell me, what do you think about it?