The Kindness Vow Sketch Dribbbs

Hey you guys, I'm looking for some feedback on this piece. Now That I am seeing it in the 600 x 800 px format, I am thinking that I can break the connection between the Captial K and lowercase i in Kindness, and maybe open up the spacing a bit.

Thoughts?

I need to try to incorporate a daisy, so that will be soon to come. But for now, I want to nail down the lettering.

Thanks! I really appreciate any input you may have!