Logotype Redraw #2 — Trello

I'm learning about logotype by redrawing existing ones.

This might be a bit off from their current Atlassian branding and a bit too generic, but I think an improvement over their current script logo which was kinda old. I also think this logotype will endure the time more if they want to keep the script style over the sans serif alternative.

Let me know what you think on the comments or if you have any request which logotype should I redraw next.